Helping you to connect with the writer within
This woman swims far out in the vast sea; the clouds are heavy and grey and raindrops bounce against the surface of the water – she is smiling.
Use this photo to prompt a story or a poem.
Thanks for the interesting prompt. My story can be found here.
Thank you so much for sharing! I’m pleased you were inspired to write something from this photo and it seemed like it fueled a lot of ideas.
There’s plenty of plot in a short piece. Two things I liked the most: 1) The name of the boat 2) How it ends – you almost don’t need to have the line “she had outwitted them”, this is clearly shown and you have it in the title, perhaps a little more on how she was feeling while throwing that match – nervous, exhilarated, nauseous…you could amplify this moment to slow it down and create further impact.
But well done! Keep writing and have a go at some of the other prompts 🙂
Thank you for the feedback. I appreciate it.
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